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thesewarmstars ([info]thesewarmstars) wrote,
@ 2009-10-14 21:58:00

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Entry tags:comm: severus sighs, hp: snucius, oneshot

Snucius: Slytherin Subtlety.
Title: Slytherin Subtlety.
Author: [info]thesewarmstars.
Pairing: Snucius.
Rating: NC-17.
Word Count: ~1,200.
Summary: Slytherin subtlety… is perhaps overrated.
Disclaimer: I’m not making money off anything, much less this.
A/N: Written for my dearest [info]whitecotton on the occasion of her birthday. My very first Snucius (*cough*that does not involve non-con*cough*)! I hope you enjoy it, and do please have a wonderful day.
Many thanks to [info]atypicalsnowman for beta-reading.



“Are you honestly asking if I’m busy this weekend?”

Severus scowled. “Of course you’re busy. What I am asking is whether or not you can reschedule any plans you might have.”

“Reschedule,” Lucius repeated disbelievingly.

“Yes. Reschedule.” Inwardly, Severus grimaced. He should have foreseen this: just because he had been planning this particular weekend for two months did not mean Lucius would miraculously be free to participate.

If he even wished to.

“Why, precisely?”

He couldn’t very well come out with ‘because I seem to have become a sodding romantic’, so instead he said, “That would be telling.”

“Severus, you know how I feel about surprises.”

That brought him up short for a moment. Did he? It seemed like knowledge he should have. Lucius was obviously implying he quite loathed surprises, but Severus had, in fact, not known it. Such a fundamental thing… God, what had he been thinking?

“Keep your plans, if you must,” Severus said. “I shall be the one to reschedule.”

Lucius pressed his lips into a tight line, considering. “No,” he said finally, “Let me send a few owls. My weekend is yours.”

Severus tried to fight back his smile, but was forced to content himself with it only escaping onto one corner of his mouth.

xx


“Well, this is… cozy.”

Severus fidgeted as he watched Lucius inspect the room. He knew too well what ‘cozy’ was euphemistic for. How stupid to think that he could impress Lucius Malfoy, this man who had the best of everything. He should never have –

“I’m glad I came,” Lucius pronounced, turning to Severus with a smile in his eyes, if not on his lips.

“You’re certain?” Severus asked. He knew the ‘weekend away’ was a big step, one Lucius might not be eager to take with him. After all, Lucius had never given any indication that Severus was more than a passing fancy to him, more than a… convenient outlet. Had he pushed too far too soon? He felt dreadfully exposed. “You could probably still salvage your previous plans.”

“I told you, Severus: my weekend is yours.”

xx


“What a long day,” Lucius said as he reached down to remove his shoes. “And we must get an early start tomorrow.”

“Indeed,” Severus answered, fingers working on buttons.

They removed the rest of their clothing in silence, folding and packing as they went in preparation for the journey home. Severus still had no idea if his plan had been a success.

“Come, Severus, lie down with me.” Lucius offered his hand and climbed into bed, pulling Severus on top of him.

Settling himself over Lucius’ long, hard body, Severus smirked. “I thought you were tired.”

“Not that tired,” Lucius answered, pressing his hips against Severus’.

Severus gasped. “Oh! Yes, it’s been a frightfully long time.”

“We made love this morning,” Lucius reminded him, amused.

“As I said.”

“You are insatiable.”

Severus rocked against Lucius, his cock growing harder with every thrust. “I don’t hear you complaining.”

“Mm, and you shan’t.” Lucius slipped a hand behind his neck and pulled him down for a heated kiss. “Unless, of course, you don’t fuck me soon.”

Severus groaned. “God, yes. Where did the lube get to?”

After a moment’s thought, Lucius reached under his pillow and produced the jar.

“Right.” Dipping his fingers into the viscous fluid, Severus sat back and stroked his other hand through the nearly white nest of hair around Lucius’ proud cock. Trailing his fingers across the smooth skin of his belly, now flushed pink with arousal, Severus commented, “You can be quite fetching at times, you know.”

“Yes. I do know,” Lucius answered, bending his knees and letting them fall open. “Are you going to make me beg?”

Circling a slick finger over Lucius’ opening, Severus tilted his head to the side in mock consideration. “Now, there’s an idea.”

“You would be waiting quite a long time for that, I’m afraid, and neither of us wants that. Now – ” he let out a gasp when Severus slipped a finger inside, “ – fuck me!”

“Now?” Severus asked, moving to kneel between Lucius’ tensed thighs and smearing lube over his cock.

“Yes, bloody now!”

Severus smirked and nudged the head of his cock against Lucius’ entrance. “It would be my pleasure,” he said and, with a low groan, thrust inside.

“Ahh! That’s… Ungh.”

“How…” He let out a strangled gasp when Lucius’ muscles clenched around him, and bucked his hips, moving deeper, as deep as he could. “How articulate.”

Eyes on Severus, hands squeezing Severus’ arms and back and sides, Lucius repeated, “Fuck me.”

“Yes.” Bracing his weight on his elbows, Severus began to thrust in earnest. As he settled into a rhythm his eyes fell closed, and he let the tight, wet heat of Lucius’ passage hugging his cock overwhelm him.

This, the fucking, they had always been good at this, and he let himself swim in it, let himself get lost in the sensations. They moved together, against each other, with nothing but skin and hot breath and sweat between them, grunting and moaning and gasping, until Severus felt the end creeping up on him.

Fingertips touched his face, and he opened his eyes. Lucius’ cheeks were flushed, his eyes half closed, and he was beautiful. “Severus,” Lucius whispered, and he came, that soft exhalation bringing him as much pleasure as the pulsing spasms of Lucius’ release squeezing rhythmically around his cock.

Severus collapsed, panting. Slowly, they shifted, rearranging their limbs into more comfortable positions, but Severus was still half draped over Lucius and he had no desire to move away. He simply lay with his face tucked against Lucius’ shoulder, trying to catch his breath and just feeling the heat of Lucius’ bare skin against his own.

Eventually, Lucius broke the silence.

“You can say it now, you know. It’s getting rather late; you might miss your chance.”

“Say what?”

Lucius smiled. “I knew you would do something, but I have to say I was not expecting a romantic weekend getaway for my birthday. It was a pleasant surprise.”

Severus’ breath caught in his throat. Birthday? It was his sodding birthday? Right now, today? How could he possibly not know that, after decades of acquaintance, years of friendship, and months of fucking? He had never felt so foolish.

After taking a moment to compose himself, Severus crafted a lazy smile and lifted his head to look at Lucius. He was, after all, Slytherin. “I’m pleased you enjoyed it. Happy birthday, Lucius.”

So what if his carefully crafted message had been mistranslated; this seemed far more important now. He would simply have to find another way, another time, to show Lucius his hopes for their future.

“Thank you,” Lucius answered, brushing his fingers through Severus’ hair. “I do hope this means you intend to… stay the course.”

Severus smiled – genuinely, this time – and pressed a kiss to Lucius’ shoulder. “Yes,” he said, heart pounding. “Yes.”

Perhaps the message had been received, after all.


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[info]torina_archelda
2009-10-15 03:13 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love this. The repeated "my weekend is yours" is so sweet and at the same time so like something I can imagine Lucius saying. I am also in love with Severus' internal monologue- questioning himself at every turn and so desperately wanting things to go well. And that fact that it was Lucius' birthday- ha! And again, Severus' internal reaction to that, and the line "He was,a fter all, Slythering." Haha. Excellent. I like this a lot. : )

Gosh. Have you ever written anything I didn't immediately fall in love with? Oh! Was rereading just now and found another line I adore- when Severus is freaking out about the whole thing and Lucius says he's glad he came. I love that. Everyone (including myself! I admit it) needs to stop writing Lucius in a way that I can actually stand him. I might need an intervention soon. *grin*

*rereads this again*

~Torina

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:39 am UTC (link)
Aww, thanks! You know my Severus, always the insecure one. (=

Glad you liked it so much!

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-10-15 04:54 am UTC (link)
It's very interesting to read what I think of as "your Severus" with someone other than Harry. You adapted him nicely here and he still feels like your own.

Thoroughly enjoyed this the first times reading it and again now. You did Lucius justice. (My God, consensual Snucius sex in a theswarmstars production?!)

Lovely!

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:40 am UTC (link)
Yeah, apparently he's versatile. d= Thanks so much!

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[info]lemondropseven
2009-10-15 05:16 am UTC (link)
I'm not sure exactly why I love this so much. I mean, it's brilliantly written, of course; and it's both sweet and scorching hot... oh, yeaaaah.
That's why I love this. ;)

My favorite lines:

Dipping his fingers into the viscous fluid, Severus sat back and stroked his other hand through the nearly white nest of hair around Lucius’ proud cock. Trailing his fingers across the smooth skin of his belly, now flushed pink with arousal, Severus commented, “You can be quite fetching at times, you know.”

Beautifully done, my dear.

My birthday in case you didn't know is Nov. 5th.
*unsubtle hint is unsubtle*

LD7

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:41 am UTC (link)
Hahaha. Glad you got it figured out. Thank you!

(And I'll keep that in mind. ( ; )

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[info]magialuna
2009-10-15 05:42 am UTC (link)
You captured both Lucius and Severus' voices so well. While it was odd for me to imagine Lucius as a 'bottom', everything was written so wonderfully that the story felt very authentic to me... besides which ist was just really hot. I loved Severus' nervousness about his place in Lucius' life and how sweetly he goes about trying to show his feelings. This was lovely, thanks for sharing!

And huge thanks to Whitecotton for having a birthday and publicly adoring Snucius!

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:42 am UTC (link)
Hey now, just because he had a cock in his arse one time doesn't make him A Bottom.

/rant

So glad you liked it! Thanks. (=

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[info]magialuna
2009-10-16 04:12 am UTC (link)
Point!

I concede to your intellect... I do like stories better where there is no true top or bottom and they take turns.

Either way it was really good...

Clare

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[info]sra_danvers
2009-10-15 05:55 am UTC (link)
I'm not in the pairing, but you made me be with your words, darling...

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:43 am UTC (link)
Haha. Yeah, me neither.

Glad you liked it anyway!

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[info]torino10154
2009-10-15 01:15 pm UTC (link)
This was really gorgeous. I just love the way Severus is fretting. Very nicely done.

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:44 am UTC (link)
Yeah, he does tend to fret, doesn't he? Glad you enjoyed it! (=

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[info]snapesgirl_62
2009-10-15 02:48 pm UTC (link)
This is one of my favorite pairing and you wrote them so well.

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:45 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks. It was my first time, so I'm glad to hear that. (=

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[info]accioslash
2009-10-15 08:34 pm UTC (link)
Wow. I'm not sure what to think. I've been reading all these amazing Snucius fics and re-thinking my view of Severus. This was lovely. The dynamics between two Slytherins vs my usual Slytherin/Gryffindor couples is really fascinating. This was so very much still recognizably 'your' Severus, but he's so different with Lucius than with Harry. I loved this new insight into his character. And I'm becoming quite fond of the fetching Malfoy Senior.

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[info]whitecotton
2009-10-16 12:39 am UTC (link)
What did I say? Huh, huh? I knew you would come round to it!

I am feeling so, so smug!

Slytherins together rule!*

*except when it's the Dark Lord and Bellatrix

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[info]accioslash
2009-10-16 03:22 am UTC (link)
Hahaha! Oh, I was intrigued by the pair beginning with a certain Games entry....Alas, Snarry will not be rid of me anytime soon. *hides Snucius love alongside already hidden Snarco devotion*

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 02:54 am UTC (link)
And I'm becoming quite fond of the fetching Malfoy Senior.

Ooh, gotta be careful with that. That could get serious. d=

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks.

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[info]accioslash
2009-10-16 03:09 am UTC (link)
Nah, Snarry fandom will never be rid of me. I'll just have to hide my sekrit love for Snucius like I've done with Snarco for years.

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[info]whitecotton
2009-10-16 12:48 am UTC (link)
This is why I love you sciency, numbery types.

I've been telling folks for eons how brilliant and hot this pairing is and yet my breath has been found to be wasted each time. Then, you come in with your technicky brain, scribble on the blackboard, and wham! we now have the formula!

Severus + Lucius = Scorchingly hot totty sex

This is wonderful, and I adore it so much.

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 03:01 am UTC (link)
Well, these things do go off better when one presents empirical evidence. ( ;

So glad you liked it! Hope you're having an enjoyable birthday. (Oh shush, it's still the fifteenth over here.)

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[info]ofey
2009-10-16 03:19 pm UTC (link)
Very sweet. Poor insecure Severus.

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Glad you liked it. (=

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[info]inamac
2009-10-16 05:39 pm UTC (link)
Oh lovely! It's so nice to read these two in a straightforward loving relationship (well, as straightforward as Slytherins ever get).

And I'm not entirely sure that it was Lucius' birthday (and neither is Severus, obviously...)

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-10-16 11:15 pm UTC (link)
Hahahaha. Yeah, I wouldn't put it past him. ( ;

Glad you enjoyed it!

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[info]countesszero
2009-11-08 09:46 am UTC (link)
severus and lucius is another underrated pairing i like. it's nice they are for once not whipping and chaining each other (although that's not too bad also) up. :)

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[info]thesewarmstars
2009-11-08 11:12 pm UTC (link)
Hahaha. Well, as fun as that sounds, glad you liked this one. ( ;

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